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发表于 2011-7-22 05:59 PM | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式




什么

诗人

诗人就是
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发表于 2011-7-22 08:17 PM | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2011-7-22 09:17 PM | 显示全部楼层
1(a
le
af
fa
ll
s)
one
l
iness

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哇噻,帅呆了,还洋文的!  发表于 2011-7-23 01:38 PM

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发表于 2011-7-22 11:38 PM | 显示全部楼层
curiosity2009 发表于 2011-7-22 18:59

什么

有人欣赏就行
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发表于 2011-7-22 11:39 PM | 显示全部楼层
没有人欣赏什么也不是

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nod, nod。。。  发表于 2011-7-23 01:39 PM
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发表于 2011-7-23 06:29 AM | 显示全部楼层
A leaf falls on loneliness ----- E. E. Cummings (1958)

http://allpoetry.com/poem/849411 ... ss_-by-e_e_cummings
(ZT) I believe the poem is about a relationship where two people come together in the first line and live life as a couple till one dies near the end. Here is my proof: In the first line we see the "1" and the "a" being 'joined' by the beginning bracket. Brackets are used to group things or ideas together. (Cummings also used grouping brackets near the end of "grasshopper" to separate words of a sentence.) get it? The letters fall down the page as a couple, paired together until the ending bracket.(death) The first time we see a 'word' is the line just after the one with the ending bracket. The word "one" appears. The line just after that is where we find the one and only line with a single character. A "1" Both lines represent singularity. Now look up a few lines where the "11" appears. Two singular symbols for 'one' placed next to each other on the line with white space above and below for emphasis. This is symbolic of a couple. Also, ask why does a leaf fall? Leaves fall when they die. Where does it fall from? Leaves fall from trees. Trees are symbolic of life. "Family tree" or "tree of life" and so on. The loneliness outside the brackets represents the feelings of the one left behind. And the final line of the poem is read as 'one-ness', again singular. BTW- "la" and "le" on the first two lines are also singular in French and other foreign languages. -=Eric=- l(a le af fa ll s) one l iness

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呵呵, 还以为你原创的呢。  发表于 2011-7-23 01:40 PM
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-7-23 01:59 PM | 显示全部楼层
看看这个鲁迅文学奖的羊羔体诗,怎么也的给咱们发个老蛇奖,胡同奖什么的。

《徐帆》
  
   徐帆的漂亮是纯女人的漂亮
   我一直想见她,至今未了心愿
   其实小时候我和她住得特近
   一墙之隔
   她家住西南跑马场那边
   我家住西北跑马场这边
   后来她红了,夫唱妇随
   拍了很多叫好又叫座的片子。
  ---------------武汉市纪委书记车延高的诗作
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发表于 2011-7-28 12:15 AM | 显示全部楼层
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